The boys were all suspicious. It was a
mystery that the house was clean. Being afraid and curious, the 5 boys
carefully went inside the house. After checking that there was no one in any of
the rooms, they waited to see if anyone came to the house. Then, there was a creaking
sound. All of the boys stopped moving, and as fast as they could, they hid so
that no one could see them.
Suddenly, hundreds of people came inside
the building. The boys were curious. Finally they realized it was a celebration
party. The party was absolutely gorgeous. All of the people wore beautiful and
fancy dresses and danced as the music played. Once the boys knew that was a
party, they wondered how to escape from the house. A few hours passed, and the
party became a club, so the boys thought it was the right time to go outside.
Cautiously, they left, and outside. After they went out they ran as fast as
they could to their homes.
By Jay

You did well to turn this story around from being a creepy beginning to a normal end. Though I would have liked to have seen an ending where the 'house had been empty for years' ^^.. Anyway good effort.
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