When people see me, there are a few things
that they don’t notice about me.
The first thing is that I was a figure skater. I
started figure skating since I was 7. I always wanted
to be a figure skater, but in the first semester of 5th grade, I quit
because I was so stressed out. I still like it, and I regret that I had quit.
Second,
I still figure skate; however, I am in a synchronized figure skating team. It
is a figure skating sport where several people dance and figure skate together
as a team. The synchronized team is called ‘Team Blessing’
Third, I am a naughty girl. People often think that I am shy, but once I get
closer with them, I jump around and do crazy
things that sometimes surprise them. These are a few things that people do not
know about me.
By Ashley Min

I think this is a great first piece of work. You show things that people wouldn't know about you, and you have organized your ideas well. Great start Ashley!
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