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woke up with my mom calling me. I knew it was 6’0 clock by the Sun on the horizon. As I got ready for the free day, my friend Maddie was waiting for me at the front yard. I earned some money from my mom who was happy about me going out. Then we visited Addy’s house to wake her up because she was still in her bed. We walked to the mall to shop and have some fun. The first stop we visited was the food court. We filled our stomachs with simple snacks. We usually spend the morning talking and eating.
By 12’0 clock we started to shop. We bought some clothes and makeup. Since there were a lot of people in the mall, we couldn’t get to see all the shops though our hands were filled with clothes and makeup. Even though we were exhausted by the end of lunch time, we were satisfied with the shopping. By the time we finished, it was about 2 P.M. We had to separate from each other to have lunch with our families. We promised to meet at the yellow bench in the park. After our family ate ‘bibimbab’ for lunch, I hurried to the yellow bench.
We had a lot of time left, so we decided to play the ‘truth or dare’ game. Since there were a lot of secrets to tell, it lasted an hour. However, we were never bored because all of the stories were
true and interesting. The game was usually about school and friends.
In the evening, we decided to stay in the park to exercise. We met some school boys that were playing basketball. Since we were also exercising, we joined the team and had a great time even though the girls team totally lost.
As the sun was dropping, my friends and I hurried to our homes to have dinner and planned for an exciting Sunday.
By Ashley Min

You did well here. There is a clear time line in the narrative and you answered the prompt well. Great organization too.
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