Monday, 21 September 2015

“Hi! I'm Justin’s mother. Nice to meet you.” said Justin’s mother.
“Hi, nice to meet you, too.” said the teacher.
“So why did you call me to come to school? Did Justin cause some problem?” said Justin’s mother.
“Yes. I heard from one of my students that Justin punched a boy named ‘Jack’, one of our class students. Jack got a big injury on his arms. I think this is a big problem. What do you have to say about this?” said the teacher.
 “Oh my goodness! How could my son do such a thing like that? I am really sorry to Jack, to you, and all of the students in the class. I will tell my son never to do this kind of thing.” said Justin’s mother.
“Fortunately, Jack is alright now. It was not a serious incident, but I want to make sure that this problem never happens again. I still do not know why Justin punched Jack. I hope Justin will never behave like this again.” said the teacher.
“I am really sorry. I will teach my son never to do it again.” said the mother.
“Thank you for coming and have a nice day.” said the teacher.

“You too have a nice day.” said Justin’s mother.

                                                                        By Jay

1 comment:

  1. After some editing this works. You finally understood the way to write a dialogue, and how to organize it. Do remember though to change line for each speaker.

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