Most
students enjoy school vacations, but my school vacations suck. Firstly, there
is too much homework to do. I have to do all my academy and school homework,
plus any bonus homework that my mom gives to me. Secondly, my mom sends me to
too many academies. She plans my schedule, and I usually need to go four
academies a day. Lastly, my parents told me that there would be no trip this
vacation. They are busy and my siblings and I have too much work to do. I like
going to school more than vacation time!
By Ashley Min

Well done here - I think you are finally getting the hang of paragraph formation. All your ideas are stitched together nicely, and well-expressed too!
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