School
uniforms are beneficial for students. Firstly, school uniforms make students
look smarter. It makes students look like model students, and they concentrate
well on studying. Also, students who wear uniforms normally go to private
school, so they seem to study diligently. Secondly, school uniforms work out to
be effective. Students should buy school uniforms whenever they grow, but it is
more effective than buying normal clothes every season and every year. Last but
not least, school uniforms can save students time. Most public school students
have trouble picking out their outfits, so they normally waste time. However,
wearing uniforms helps students save time because they don’t have many clothes
to change into. Therefore, school uniforms give advantages for students.
By Ashley Min

This one we did together, and its good to see how the finished paragraph turned out. You have a good piece of work here.
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